Tuesday, 29 March 2016

Whakapapa 2016

Description: I went on family echo and I did my family tree. It was so fun first it was me. My family is so big 43 people and more.


Feedback/Feedforward: I like how it is so easy to read but you could make it a bit smaller because it is in my face. Jake

Wednesday, 23 March 2016

I State

Description: We are learning to use I state. So we made a video for it. I state is when you say I feel... When... Because...

Feedback/Feedforward: I like how you spoke clearly but you speak louder so people can here you. Jake

Tuesday, 22 March 2016

Big Auckland Holiday

Description: First we have to draw a awesome picture. Next we writing about the picture I draw it a cute bunny car it the best car in the world.


Writing: Beep beep beep "I'm on holiday." I'm going to Auckland on my awesome holiday. I can see some trees, bushes and mountains. I love my cute bunny car it is so cold outside. Rrrrr I'm so hungry so I pull over at Beneys. Back on the road diving again. I can not believe my eyes I pull over I hop out I look around I see gold!! I'm back on the road to follow the gold, Auckland yay. I see a plain mountain of gold  I start climbing the mountain of gold dodging full rocks of gold and dribbles of lava.

Feedback/Feedforward: I like how you tell were you are and I like what you say what you are doing. Next time I think you need to work on some Sinalis At the beginning and the onamatapaer. shaun 

Sunday, 13 March 2016

Camp Eportfolio 2016

Description: We did lore of fun stuff at camp. We had 10 activities they are so awesome. The most fun one for me is water slide.

Feedback/Feedward: I like how you described that you liked the food and how you told the teachers how to improve for camp.I think you can make the sentences longer next time. Shrawan


Thursday, 3 March 2016

One word portfolio

Description: first Elly took a photo we did a one word it was very hard. We did a demo the with note book.Next we cut it out and glued it on to the photo.

Feedback/Feedforward: I like how it stand out maybe next time you should make the cat a little lest more scared. Because it looks a bit scared.rebekah🐣

Evaluation: I like how I did the fun and next time I word like to make it more fun.

Camp goals

We need goals for camp so one to be hook to the one word.